Saturday, May 21, 2016

The legend of the moon

Long long there was no moon there were two brothers William and Henry they were fighting a lot they never got on. They didn't feel like brothers Liam the God kindness and saw them fighting And seemed in his ears and annoyed him so he  Chuck them into the sky then they became the moon and When they cry their tears are the stars.

The End.

1 comment:

  1. You've got a great idea for a story. You need to develop the characters and setting more.

    Remember to read your writing out loud to check it makes sense.